Dark Eyed Pixie

Um, tell Jack I'm really sorry for not trusting him. I feel bad, I was sure he was gonna be a creep. Post more. Now. PM me when you do. ...

Hehe you review mine, I review yours. People have done all the nit-picking, I'll just tell you what I think. I like it. I really, really don't trust Jack though.

All humor on the outside, that was me, but inside I was mentally destroying myself. I really like this, I can't wait to read the rest!

Thank you so much. This is the result of an english assignment and my over enthusiasm! It was only meant to be a short description,but.... well if it involves writing ...

Well, there isn't much left for me to say you guys pretty much covered it all ! I think if you make a few changes to it it would be ...